how can ordinary words
describe the sunlit undersides of geese,
or how the swamp maple,
in the first blush of dawn,
thrusts an implausible pink trunk
into the sky?
exactly which upper
and lower case letters will allow you to
feel the bite of the first frost
on your carelessly bare feet
skipping through the wet fire
to the sound of syncopated honks?
hours from now
unless these observations are
fixed on the open sky of the page
who will understand how your
shadowed footprints melted
into the dying grass
or how the great birds were swallowed
by the rising light?
6 comments:
Wonderful!
Boy I wish you would put a book out filled with your glorious prose. I would be first in line to buy it.
You capture my thoughts but so much better than me or maybe I mean differently. "Sunlit undersides of geese". Magnificent.
XO
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Furry Gnome: Thank you!
WWW: I have made small books of collected poems for family and friends and a self-published book of my prose. Perhaps I will make a book pf poetry -It would be a good winter project. If that happens, I'll be sure to let you know :) Thank you for your kind words.
wow what an amazing poem I really enjoyed that
Such a beautiful poem!
Soooo beautiful!
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