The sun's
as hot as melted cheese,
It oozes
down between the leaves,
then
spreads itself across the lawn
and slides
along the trunks of trees.
By noon
all trace of cool has gone,
the birds
have ceased to sing their songs,
and every
breathing thing is still,
until the
daylight's almost gone.
Then
thunderheads begin to build,
all black
and blue behind the hill.
the sky
takes on an eerie glow
and slowly
rain begins to spill
The storm
may calm the heat for now,
like
asprin soothes a fevered brow,
but
searing heat is summer's vow,
yes
searing heat is summer's vow.
6 comments:
Pauline:
Your poem made me hungry, but I'll leave the air conditioneron. Great metaphor!
ha. i love the sun hot as melted cheese dripping down through the trees...i have always wanted to do a poem using grilled cheese and you got it...smiles...
That heat is nasty. That photo actually looks as though lava is crossing the yard!
I love your poem SO much! It is very hot in Oregon right now and everything stays under cover until about 7 PM when it cools down. Then you can hear the birds and crickets.
So beautifully crafted it almost (not quite) makes one grateful for the heat that inspired your poem.
lol Marc - n point in melting the cheese twice!
Brian, if you post one, tell me!
Tabor - the heat continues. I am now as melted as hot cheese!
Kerry - all the bugs and the birds are silent at the hottest part of the day.
J - thank you, as always. No need to be too grateful for this heat, though!
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