This Sunday's writing prompt was 12 ways of looking at snow.
One
an arbitrator between autumn and spring
keeping storm scores and stats on plummeting temperatures
Two
a cat burglar, sneaking in on a passing cold front
stealing color, hiding the tricycle and the dog’s dish,
disguising the starkness of trees with fluff, covering its
tracks
as it leaves
Three
a bully, sweeping in on a fierce wind,
a white fury casting cold spells,
spinning and dancing like a colorless gypsy
tapping its tambourine fingers against the window panes
Four
A blanket of silence covering sky and earth,
flung out and floating down silently
in heaps and wrinkles
Five
an ice challenge, wicked, cold, and inhospitable
hard as rock, unyielding even to the distant sun
Six
a nightmare like a thief in the night
stealing the familiar, leaving an expanse of
nothingness where light was
Seven
a gossamer dream, a fairy tale, a story of
eternal cold dressed in ermine, of diamond faceted jewels
that glitter under a pale moon
Eight
a blustery uncle, all noise and fake promises
who rushes in, pulls out his watch, and says, “I must
hurry,”
as he dashes off
Nine
a lingering guest, one who arrives unexpectedly, expects a
room and food, languishes on the sofa with a hand to her
head,
her scarf trailing across the roads and fields and tangling
in the branches of the trees
Ten
an artist with a monochromatic palette, painting with broad
strokes.
Eleven
an eraser, an impenetrable veil, a swirl of opaque white, a
myriad of genies
escaped and coalesced, their arms and bodies so entwined
that no light
pierces their pallid shadows
Twelve
a silence so profound one can hear only his own heartbeat
counting the seconds,
his own blood swishing to the same tempo of snowflakes
falling on his sleeve
In Terms of Snow
Tlatim falls like flour from a sifter,
tlamo slaps at the windows like white wings —
two mysteries enfolded in the word snow,
the very idea of which, penstla,
will become tomorrow’s deep drifts.
Tlun sparkles in the moonlight,
sotla makes prisms in the morning light,
while here in the lower 48,
snow merely drifts and packs,
powders the ski slopes,
blows itself into sudden squalls,
and turns to slush in the sun.
Eskimo snow terms from http://ontology.buffalo.edu/smith/varia/snow.html
10 comments:
Leave it to you to look at snow in every which way but with a snarl on your lip. Lovely.
This is wonderful, Pauline! I can't decide which is my favorite because they are all such great ways to look at snow. A gossamer dream? Or maybe a cat burglar...oh I just don't know.
Lovely. I am partial to two, four, and seven. I love snow. Last night the snow was Christmas snow. It thrilled me. Light and shimmery, almost like rain. My world was glittering and the best part was I didn't have to go anywhere.
Well, if you can make up such descriptions of snow it cannot be so bad.
I like the idea of snow being a thief coming in softly, stealing all it touches.
Keep warm and safe, and I hope it will come to an end soon.
A silence so profound, a very nice time for me just to listen to the flakes.
All interesting, all truly poetic, but the one that for me sums up how I actually FEEL about this winter's snows is --
The lingering guest!
So insensitive, so unaware, outstaying her welcome by a long shot and too languid to notice, let alone care.
Zing!
ha. i have felt the full range of these over the last 8 days...i loved it, hated it...saw it as savior and oppressor...i have appreciated its silence and longed for it to be broken as well...
They all make sense to me, but you say it so well!
Great job! Applause. Your descriptions were all distinct and interesting and visual!
Hilary - the only time I don't like snow is when I have to drive in it!
Kerry - this exercise was great fun :)
Gary - you should continue making a list of your own!
Friko - I'm a fan of all seasons. It's worth it to find something to love in each one.
OOTP - you describe some of my favorite moments :)
Judith - oddly enough you popped into my mind as I was writing that one...
Brian - sometimes one can take just so much...
Thank you, Furry :)
Tabor - taking a bow ;) Thank you.
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