I stood and let the night fall
down around me.
At the horizon the sky
was palest pink;
directly overhead,
when I craned my neck to see,
a lone star pricked through
the growing darkness.
Crickets sang, and katydids,
but the birds were silent.
The air was soft and barely moved.
We were quiet, the evening and I,
contemplating each other.
I wrapped my sweater around my shoulders
and dreamed as the mantle of shadowy gray
drifted silently down over
what was left of the day, and me.
6 comments:
it is a peacefulness that settles over me at night...and in reading your words as well...smiles. love the cricket song too...
Day is done, gone the sun.
Pauline:
You've caught the nearly silent stillness of the moment.
Beautiful and contemplative words, Pauline, so like you. This seems like a late August poem, somehow.
Brian - yes, it's definitely a feeling of peace that steals over me, too.
Tabor - that tune always moves me to tears...
Marc - thanks :) I was hoping to.
Kerry - I like to think of others thinking of me that way, and yes, late August begins the melancholy time, beautiful and poignant at once.
So lovely and a perfect description. Thank you!
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