Here's my own construction:
There is music in nature—
the sigh of needled boughs,
the staccato of pouring rain,
the bellow of an icy wind,
the bell ring of water over stones,
arias sung by summer birds
and dirges played by storms,
but no music is as sweet
as the symphonies of places loved—
the violins of longing,
the persistent drumbeat of the heart
underlying every blade of grass,
gracing every memory
of wall and walk.
13 comments:
smiles...so true...i love the use of music in this...and there are those places i could come back to and never grow old of them..
Amen to that, Pauine!
Nice juxtaposition and good rendtion of that exercise on your part!
so beautiful... so glad I stopped by, such an elegant poem.
Perfect.. beautiful and so true.
I love Sara Teasdale, and you have more than done her justice. Great prompt, great poem. Thanks!
Could I borrow your friend? Or better yet, both of you?
Getting together to write is the most magical thing I can think of. You must be close to be able to do that. I shall suggest to my (not very close) writing group that we use the occasional prompt.
Being a permanently lonely person looking to find her roots, your poem speaks directly to my heart.
Brian - there's music everywhere, yes?
Thanks, Dick
Tabor - sometimes prompts work, sometimes they don't
Laura, thanks!
Hilary - the place I miss most is the one in the photo. I grew up there.
Thanks, Kerry.
Friko - we could do it on Skype and you could join us!
Music always triggers memories in me. I love this!
I recognized the homestead immediately! Lots of memories.
Karl - all my memories of home are good ones. I still miss the old homestead! Thanks for visiting and commenting...
barbara - in this case, memories trigger music!
The picture and the lovely poem immediately made me think about the home I grew up in, now lived in by strangers. That brings with it a little sadness, but the memories are happy ones.
Anne - my happy memories of my childhood home (in the photo) are tinged with a longing, too, for not only the vanished days but for the house itself which I still long to inhabit.
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