The new oldest covered bridge in MA (rebuilt after a fire destroyed the original structure) |
Covered Bridge Thoughts
The way the sun paints my walls
in broad strokes
and diagonal slashes,
illuminating initials twined in hearts,
and the mud-plastered swallow’s nest
on the highest rafter—
The way the restless water murmurs
of muskrats and marsh grass
and the far places from which it has fled
as it rushes seaward—
The echo of feet on my rough planks,
and the cavernous, roofed darkness—
Either end brings the traveler into the light again
or out of the rain.
The strength of my trusses
like great arms lifting,
and the grace of my span—
river, wood, and a trust in design
meant to reconcile the gap between
here and there.
I am the bridge.
19 comments:
love how you bring the bridge alive with the textures...the intials carved, the swallows nest, the creaking...well played and congrats on the publishing...
Congratulations, nice imagery :)
Congrats from me too. Love bridges. You captured all the nuances internal and external. Excellent.
Henry Clemmons
Beautiful -- I can see the bridge you wrote about when I close my eyes. :)
Beautiful pic and words.
Very nice thoughts, a good visual was produced.Two counties over has a collection of bridges that served for the backdrop of the movie,"Bridges of Madison County".
For as long as I can remember, I have wanted to visit a covered bridge. They fascinate me...your poem brings them to life. I imagine all the generations of people who had trysts or just travelled through a covered bridge.
I'm so glad it was reconstructed...so much of the old has not. xo
Yes you 'are the bridge' taking us 'from here to there' with this poem.
I always wondered about covered bridges, then realised that they make sense, keeping snow and rain off the structure and offering building options with trussing, as you suggest, so much stronger by virtue of height.
A nice thought to start your poem with and it just keeps better. Lovely picture
So lovely. You made me smile.
cheers, jj
Brian - the new bridge lacks the old charm of the deteriorating one from my childhood but I love walking through it and hearing the echoes of my footsteps. To speak poetry inside it is to have an audience!
lynn -thank you
Henry (KDP), thanks - words are great playthings, aren't they?
I've done my work well, then Mystic M - thanks
Thank KB
OUTP - loved that book and the movie as well. My daughter visited those bridges on her drive through Madison County
Marion - come for a visit. we will walk through that bridge!
Stafford - they are charmingly efficient structures.
Thanks for stopping by Kodjo
JJ - glad to do it :)
The point of view makes all the difference, it makes me really THINK about the bridge in a way I wouldn't if it were a human observer.
Stunning imagery =)
Fortunate bridge to be celebrated so lyrically.
Very much enjoyed your personification of the bridge and the images you create in this one.
So perfectly told from the standpoint of the bridge!
Judith - thanks - sometimes this works
thanks MLM
Dick - this was my first publicly published poem!
thank you liv2
Barbara - I trend to personify everything!
I just read your comment on my post, this is my reply:
if you didn't stop to ponder, you wouldn't be able to write so feelingly about the thoughts of a bridge.
I know which people I prefer, you are one of them.
Friko - we're two peas in a pod :)
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