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| Image from Magpie #50 |
Road Sign Redux
Hike the Appalachian Trail
and you’re likely to run into bears,
cougars, rainstorms, poison ivy,
boulders, hunger, thirst,
and a snake or two. The signs
don't tell you this.
South to Georgia, north to Maine,
4.9 miles to Little Gap,
16 to Leroy's Shelter.
Come across one of these signs
in the woods and suddenly you're
Robert Frost, choosing.
Signs point. You decide.
It's like waking up one morning
knowing you're no longer lost.
18 comments:
i have spent many a night on the AT in a sleeping bag...and heard them walking by...
That's why I won't do the trail. Bears!
i had a friend who flew from england for four summers in a row to do a chunk of the appalachian trail. his stories - written on thin blue paper in striped airmail letters after he got home - were beautiful . . . the finest confection! steven
All great, but I love those last two stanzas!
I agree with patteran...the last two stanzas complete it so well. You are simply awesome, Pauline, in your writing. Every time I visit, I leave feeling like I've been in the presence of a real wordsmith and I can't think of anything better than that!
Good write. The pic also made me think of Frost. Just wondering, have you read 'A Walk in the Woods' by Bryson?
Brian M - the trail is nearby but though I've hiked short bits of it, I've never camped overnight along it.
There are bears in my backyard, Thingy, so that's not a new danger ;)
Steven - Years ago I met and interviewed a young woman who was walking from Georgia to Maine - she said it was a voyage of discovery
Thanks, Dick! I like the idea that choosing makes all the difference
Ah Marion - thank you!
I have, Mary. I made the mistake of reading it on an airplane journey and found myself being embarrassed often by laughing out loud.
Love that last stanza - it sings with promise. Wonderful piece...
Signs point. You decide. The shortness of the lines speaks for the matter-of-factness of decisions. Just make them!
I love this. You know, I'm always looking for signs, right? Yep.
Aaaah to be lost in the woods with Robert Frost!!! This whole piece amazes me .... I love love LOVE it!!!
Aaaah to be lost in the woods with Robert Frost!!! This whole piece amazes me .... I love love LOVE it!!!
Sorry I could not travel both.
Thanks for taking me along on your hike... Absolutely loved where you took this prompt, with Robert Frost, choosing (presumably) the road less traveled, and finally waking up un-lost. What can I say? Beautiful!
Great last line1
Thanks Tumble - always glad to hear from you
Sioux - thanks for stopping to read and comment. I found your own contribution to magpie very compelling.
Reya - signs abound!
Thanks, Lynn - pleased to have you read and comment
Tess, one can always go back and take the other way, provided one hasn't gone too far...
Thanks, gospel - sometimes my words take me places I an't have imagined...
And THAT is why I'm a "City Girl".
Cheers, jj
Oh my! You aren't likely to convert people to becoming outdoorsy via this post, but you speak the truth.
Also, one of my suite mates in college had to memorize that Frost poem. She did so out loud and often. As a result, we all learned it and took to doing dramatic interpretations while reciting along with her.
So the words, "Two roads diverged in a yellow wood..." bring out the ham in me to this day. The not very deeply buried ham ;-)
Oink.
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