Sunday, July 03, 2011

Happy 4th!

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4TH OF JULY

Deep in the dark, 
after the dogs and burgers, 
the deviled eggs,
the watermelon seed-spitting contest,

after the badminton and high dives,
 the dive back to the
still laden tables,

and the satiated somnolence
that crept over everyone
like a warm blanket -


after all that came the night,

with its anticipation of sky-fire 
and canon boom,
sparklers held at arm's length,

the ooohing and ahhing,
the window-cracking BANG!
of Chinese firecrackers, 

paper and flash powder exploding like stars
deep in the dark.

8 comments:

  1. Since it is just the two of us I have not decided if we will go see the boom and bang...yet.

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  2. Oh, the magical sparklers!

    You make me nostalgic even for things I haven't fully experienced!

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  3. nice...you captured the eve lovely...we will slip onto the green of the country club to watch their fun...

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  4. We just finished our excuse for fireworks a couple of days ago. (July 1st was Canada Day.) Enjoy yours. :)

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  5. It's just like being there.. you with your magical words.

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  6. Oh wow. You made me miss fireworks so hard! It was great seeing some yesterday, though. Nice poem!

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    International call

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  7. Tabor - I didn't have to go anywhere as it turned out - the neighbor's son staged a small display in my own backyard!

    J - I loved those sparklers! Haven't held one in years...

    Brian - there used to be fireworks on the 4th itself. Then the surrounding towns chose different nights. This year there weren't any close by!

    Frank - any excuse for a picnic and fireworks ;)

    Thanks, Hilary! Words can paint pictures if you encourage them.

    And thank you, too, Jimmy. Thanks for stopping by to read and comment.

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  8. This year I saw the fireworks over the ocean from a blanket on the sand. And it was after the dogs and burgers and deviled eggs :)

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