Tuesday, April 19, 2011

5-7-5



small poems of life,

blossoms of words open up

to reveal a truth.




10 comments:

  1. i wish for that in both my reading and my writing. lovely pauline. steven

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  2. VERY nice, so suitable to the violets.

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  3. What a lovely way to put this, very nice.

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  4. love it when they open up truths...smiles.

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  5. Nicely done... Haiku is so hard for me...with my verbal diarrhea.

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  6. EXTRA lovely. Sweet succinct truth of flowers and pretty poetry.

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  7. Beautiful - and the photo is a perfect complement to the poem.

    Violet

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  8. Steven - every once in a while the words just form themselves...

    Judith - those are last year's but the new ones are coming up!

    Thanks for visiting, Ginny

    Brian - :)

    Tabor - it's the challenge I like ;)

    Thanks for stopping by to read Jannie

    Violet - and your name!

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  9. Haikus are so cool. If you can write the, And you wrote a very good one.

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  10. Thanks, MAS - I think what I have written is not a true Haikai verse as much as it is a 5-7-5 syllable piece. The more I read about haiku, the more I realize I don't know how to write them properly.

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