tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11542365.post7770954388972163385..comments2023-12-24T18:38:29.947-08:00Comments on Writing Down the Words: Trying out rhyme schemes...Paulinehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14555472024981357622noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11542365.post-18974302427828530872011-08-04T11:23:36.152-07:002011-08-04T11:23:36.152-07:00Friko - I think it's a villanelle but I may be...Friko - I think it's a villanelle but I may be wrong. Usually when I'm trying out forms I make a note of what is is but I forgot on this one. I think all poetry sounds better read aloud!<br /><br />tms - I like both rhyme and rhythm and find them a useful and worthy challenge. Thanks for coming by to read and comment.Paulinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14555472024981357622noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11542365.post-90109956224169658812011-08-04T04:28:16.350-07:002011-08-04T04:28:16.350-07:00Rhyme and rhythm may be deemed old-fashioned, but ...Rhyme and rhythm may be deemed old-fashioned, but I always enjoy a modern view cast into classical form (not sure if this metaphor works, though). In enjoy both the music you write and the music you evoke, Pauline.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11542365.post-16333163143024309962011-08-02T14:46:43.387-07:002011-08-02T14:46:43.387-07:00It's lovely.
Does the form have a name? There...It's lovely.<br /><br />Does the form have a name? There is a lot of rhythm to it, I read it out loud.Frikohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04277167831642088694noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11542365.post-59322803393891034232011-08-01T18:02:48.543-07:002011-08-01T18:02:48.543-07:00OOTP - it's my favorite kind of music
Brian M...OOTP - it's my favorite kind of music<br /><br />Brian M - me too!<br /><br />Molly, for the life of me I can't remember what form this is - a villanelle maybe but the rhyming doesn't seem quite right for that. I marked most of my poems with the form I was trying out, except this one. <br /><br />J - a neat description though I find making lace much more difficult.<br /><br />Thanks Paulinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14555472024981357622noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11542365.post-10371727127985906792011-08-01T16:55:04.607-07:002011-08-01T16:55:04.607-07:00A beautiful reminder of the lovely "Free Trea...A beautiful reminder of the lovely "Free Treats" life offers.Meggiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13074676856646898900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11542365.post-84310119543652147372011-08-01T15:37:26.361-07:002011-08-01T15:37:26.361-07:00You are amongst many trees, as am I but only a sti...You are amongst many trees, as am I but only a stiff breeze produces the sounds indicated.<br /> <br />But I will listen . . .goatmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02317617928368945316noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11542365.post-7053154061393523422011-08-01T07:19:20.915-07:002011-08-01T07:19:20.915-07:00Oh, I love this poem, and I'm so glad I didn&#...Oh, I love this poem, and I'm so glad I didn't miss it! I've been off the computer a lot this summer...<br /><br />We had Wind and Lightning and Thunder last night...I wish I had read this poem before it happened. The Wind certainly did conduct with expertise...I love this line! And a concert surely did rise out of it!<br /><br />So great...thanks so much! xxMarionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00607220451457829777noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11542365.post-47488447659968817872011-07-31T21:57:44.913-07:002011-07-31T21:57:44.913-07:00I love listening to nature's symphony and your...I love listening to nature's symphony and your poem captured it perfectly!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11542365.post-83419990215643485532011-07-31T13:48:52.428-07:002011-07-31T13:48:52.428-07:00As intricate as lace!
You love a challenge poetica...As intricate as lace!<br />You love a challenge poetically speaking, Pauline, and always rise, not only up to, but above it.Judithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09923213564117527485noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11542365.post-47174273122585724292011-07-31T12:54:23.102-07:002011-07-31T12:54:23.102-07:00i don't remember much from H.S. English about ...i don't remember much from H.S. English about writing poetry, except for strings of repetitive letters, but this is wonderful! makes me think I should have paid better attention. I especially love how the rhyme doesn't always come at the end of a line.....mollyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03797484583400519909noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11542365.post-34414525170315026982011-07-31T10:42:37.819-07:002011-07-31T10:42:37.819-07:00ah whata beautiful nature song you have captured....ah whata beautiful nature song you have captured...just the music i love to hear...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11542365.post-66239519339205713632011-07-31T09:02:38.935-07:002011-07-31T09:02:38.935-07:00I hear that song a lot and have a hard time not be...I hear that song a lot and have a hard time not being outside to enjoy it.Out on the prairiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09548162534362532705noreply@blogger.com