tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11542365.post5359636021039828009..comments2023-12-24T18:38:29.947-08:00Comments on Writing Down the Words: GeesePaulinehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14555472024981357622noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11542365.post-53588825301068433682012-04-11T03:02:26.581-07:002012-04-11T03:02:26.581-07:00Kerry - the pond near my house is quite large and ...Kerry - the pond near my house is quite large and often there are several hundred geese resting and feeding there.Paulinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14555472024981357622noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11542365.post-23520579436798912382012-04-10T18:45:00.723-07:002012-04-10T18:45:00.723-07:00I didn't even notice, or much care, that this ...I didn't even notice, or much care, that this was a single sentence. It's just really beautiful.<br /><br />I usually only see geese high above, or perhaps landed in a farmer's field. Not usually in a pond. Thanks!Kerryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15281288495129054688noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11542365.post-25414074652981477732012-04-10T15:41:13.207-07:002012-04-10T15:41:13.207-07:00Ah Steven - thank you!
Tabor-I love to watch them...Ah Steven - thank you!<br /><br />Tabor-I love to watch them come in, peppering the water and shouting to one another.<br /><br />Me too, Molly, me too!<br /><br />Thanks, OOTP<br /><br />And than you Hilary - that's what I was hoping.<br /><br />Frank - thanks. Those pearls are every bit as beautiful as real ones.Paulinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14555472024981357622noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11542365.post-87178490952117071622012-04-10T09:01:52.918-07:002012-04-10T09:01:52.918-07:00I listen for the call of the wild as often as poss...I listen for the call of the wild as often as possible these days. Very nice poem. Love the use of "water pearls."Frank Baronhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07766219281485749395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11542365.post-74890119244820819912012-04-10T08:34:21.025-07:002012-04-10T08:34:21.025-07:00It was as real as if they touched down in front of...It was as real as if they touched down in front of me. Beautiful, Pauline.Hilaryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12787493532006658679noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11542365.post-43065452615889715262012-04-10T07:20:39.705-07:002012-04-10T07:20:39.705-07:00Very elegant, they always capture my attention .Very elegant, they always capture my attention .Out on the prairiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09548162534362532705noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11542365.post-45178299268786133442012-04-10T06:59:57.260-07:002012-04-10T06:59:57.260-07:00Lovely photo, lovely words! There is definitely so...Lovely photo, lovely words! There is definitely something in me that "wants to fly, to soar, to cut the air with sharp wings!"<br />Maybe in my next life I'll be an eagle!mollyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03797484583400519909noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11542365.post-27758289291604117252012-04-10T05:25:20.226-07:002012-04-10T05:25:20.226-07:00This does capture that magic arrival of the water...This does capture that magic arrival of the water birds.Taborhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15257045780724471840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11542365.post-70339083895849099122012-04-10T04:40:46.259-07:002012-04-10T04:40:46.259-07:00i'm glad to hold my breath through your writin...i'm glad to hold my breath through your writing pauline . . . so beautiful and whole! stevenstevenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14132104804524716898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11542365.post-60155840114394548592012-04-10T04:22:39.174-07:002012-04-10T04:22:39.174-07:00Brian - in some book years ago I read an entire tw...Brian - in some book years ago I read an entire two pages that were actually one impossibly long sentence. I wish now I'd written down the title and author (perhaps I did and just can't find it) but, though I was breathless at the end, I was also delighted that it was possible to do such a thing!Paulinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14555472024981357622noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11542365.post-55247222005756895582012-04-10T04:04:45.529-07:002012-04-10T04:04:45.529-07:00one long sentence kinda leaves me a bit breathless...one long sentence kinda leaves me a bit breathless...but i think yours def captures some beauty...smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com