tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11542365.post330950734070750041..comments2023-12-24T18:38:29.947-08:00Comments on Writing Down the Words: The BoxPaulinehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14555472024981357622noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11542365.post-44211633104457180732013-08-14T17:14:36.347-07:002013-08-14T17:14:36.347-07:00ACIL - My own take on the ending is much like your...ACIL - My own take on the ending is much like yours - life is such an adventure! Paulinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14555472024981357622noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11542365.post-16014298130572177142013-08-14T07:36:34.109-07:002013-08-14T07:36:34.109-07:00I love the way you peel off layer after layer of y...I love the way you peel off layer after layer of your box. I don't know how to read the ending, though. I feel it more than trying to make sense of it. It's more like "whatever life throws at me, I'll take it and make it mine" type of attitude. Which suits me fine. Many thanks.<br /><br />Greetings from London.A Cuban In Londonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16423293358605007539noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11542365.post-52879909243592828212013-08-12T05:07:28.547-07:002013-08-12T05:07:28.547-07:00Brian - It was an interesting exercise. I like the...Brian - It was an interesting exercise. I like the tangle of joy, too.<br /><br />Friko - I hope you do the exercise. I'd love to read your take!<br /><br />Thanks, Kerry. It's fun when the words flow. The poem needs work; this is just a first draft, but fun nonetheless.<br /><br />And thank you, OOTP. I imagine your box would be filled with prairie flowers!<br /><br />B - I like those Paulinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14555472024981357622noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11542365.post-9085941386431134882013-08-11T14:34:26.074-07:002013-08-11T14:34:26.074-07:00Beautiful. As always. I'm getting an urge to e...Beautiful. As always. I'm getting an urge to explore my poetic side... Dianehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16637670293642285740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11542365.post-1734858581223088042013-08-06T22:51:02.819-07:002013-08-06T22:51:02.819-07:00Very nice and filled with wonder! I thoroughly enj...Very nice and filled with wonder! I thoroughly enjoyed this post!!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16539850495318868267noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11542365.post-65149293290288814092013-08-06T20:36:27.071-07:002013-08-06T20:36:27.071-07:00I loved this, Pauline, and especially the image of...I loved this, Pauline, and especially the image of you at the end, hope in one hand, going on. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11542365.post-91489292065536243952013-08-05T01:10:06.751-07:002013-08-05T01:10:06.751-07:00Smashing stuff.
Ent-like.
Teachers' lounge.
...Smashing stuff.<br /><br />Ent-like.<br /><br />Teachers' lounge.<br /><br />x B.<br /><br />Peter Bryentonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10581859685728207325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11542365.post-34440623699877726232013-08-04T16:48:38.464-07:002013-08-04T16:48:38.464-07:00Amazing pieceAmazing pieceOut on the prairiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09548162534362532705noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11542365.post-18940897378444546452013-08-04T13:02:41.563-07:002013-08-04T13:02:41.563-07:00This is the most magical box ever. So beautiful Pa...This is the most magical box ever. So beautiful Pauline!Kerryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15281288495129054688noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11542365.post-33472819250457814362013-08-04T10:30:35.538-07:002013-08-04T10:30:35.538-07:00Wonderful, that’s one to follow.
But how to follow...Wonderful, that’s one to follow.<br />But how to follow, what is there to say after having taken in your words?<br /><br />Perhaps I would have to shut the box rather than open it.Frikohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04277167831642088694noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11542365.post-30813237457105612082013-08-04T09:35:45.326-07:002013-08-04T09:35:45.326-07:00i rather like the thought of a tangle of joy makin...i rather like the thought of a tangle of joy making its way in my box...totally get the anticipation of whats in the box...if i was a cat, i would be dead by now...ha....now shake hope out...smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com