Tuesday, April 19, 2011

5-7-5



small poems of life,

blossoms of words open up

to reveal a truth.




10 comments:

steven said...

i wish for that in both my reading and my writing. lovely pauline. steven

Judith said...

VERY nice, so suitable to the violets.

Ginny said...

What a lovely way to put this, very nice.

Brian Miller said...

love it when they open up truths...smiles.

Tabor said...

Nicely done... Haiku is so hard for me...with my verbal diarrhea.

Jannie Funster said...

EXTRA lovely. Sweet succinct truth of flowers and pretty poetry.

violet said...

Beautiful - and the photo is a perfect complement to the poem.

Violet

Pauline said...

Steven - every once in a while the words just form themselves...

Judith - those are last year's but the new ones are coming up!

Thanks for visiting, Ginny

Brian - :)

Tabor - it's the challenge I like ;)

Thanks for stopping by to read Jannie

Violet - and your name!

M. A. S. said...

Haikus are so cool. If you can write the, And you wrote a very good one.

Pauline said...

Thanks, MAS - I think what I have written is not a true Haikai verse as much as it is a 5-7-5 syllable piece. The more I read about haiku, the more I realize I don't know how to write them properly.